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Here's my "informal" critique for you:
First off, I'm just gonna say I like the effort you put into the background. I'm SO lazy with backgrounds it's ridiculous ( <- self slap) The petals, carpet, bench drapes all add a nice touch to the scene. I love the girl's face! She's so adorable and happy looking <3 the veil and gown is beautiful and I love your choice of color (although I'd pick another design other than snowflakes, it seems a bit too christmasy..but then again, it's your own personal gown).
Now, try to make your hair flow more instead of clumping it up together. I love the fact that you added blush but try to blend it into her skin more so it looks more natural. And for your shading in general, try and use both "solid" and "blurred" techniques (sorry if this is vague but I don't know how else to describe it) Also, give more variety to the flowers in your bouquet, otherwise, it'll look very lego-like!
Keep up the good work! You have great potential love!
First off, I'm just gonna say I like the effort you put into the background. I'm SO lazy with backgrounds it's ridiculous ( <- self slap) The petals, carpet, bench drapes all add a nice touch to the scene. I love the girl's face! She's so adorable and happy looking <3 the veil and gown is beautiful and I love your choice of color (although I'd pick another design other than snowflakes, it seems a bit too christmasy..but then again, it's your own personal gown).
Now, try to make your hair flow more instead of clumping it up together. I love the fact that you added blush but try to blend it into her skin more so it looks more natural. And for your shading in general, try and use both "solid" and "blurred" techniques (sorry if this is vague but I don't know how else to describe it) Also, give more variety to the flowers in your bouquet, otherwise, it'll look very lego-like!
Keep up the good work! You have great potential love!